Then there's the ending: "Another black screen appeared with more scary sounds.at the end,a (space needed) scary Spongebob image appeared with a loud scream." It's not very descriptive and gives the story the feeling that it was written in a few minutes and not a lot of thought was put into it.
"We opened the box and there was a disk marked with (a) pen and it said "Death Sponge" we thought it was a simple joke and we put (pushed) PLAY." Ignoring the wording issues, this feels relatively generic.
Who is we in that sentence? Why are you reviewing episodes? Where'd you find this random box? It doesn't really work as an opening. "I thought i'd (I'd) never have to see that, 2011, the year when Spongebob (SpongeBob) season 8 released, when we were reviewing the episodes, we found a box with a white cover art." Besides the capitalization issues, this is a pretty clunky opening. That being said, this story likely won't pass the appeals because it really isn't up to quality standards. Another black screen appeared with more scary sounds.at the end,a scary Spongebob image appeared with a loud scream.įirst things first, lost episode pastas are currently blacklisted and need to go through a Spinoff Appeal.
Only 5 tombs were in that cemetery, but the one Patrick and company were looking at, said Spongebob Squarepants, the characters continued crying. After 15 seconds a loud scream skirl.that scared us too much, the next scene was Patrick, Squidward, Mr. The episode started with the same intro, but when the title card appear it said "Death Sponge" and there was static and instead of music there was a very annoying sound, so the episode started with Patrick catching jellyfish but Spongebob was not there, only Patrick, the scene repeated 3 times, after that, a black screen appeared with strange sounds. We opened the box and there was a disk marked with pen and it said "Death Sponge" we thought it was a simple joke and we put PLAY. I thought i'd never have to see that, 2011, the year when Spongebob season 8 released, when we were reviewing the episodes, we found a box with a white cover art.
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